So I went and actually clicked on the thing after I made my previous comment, and based on my pained skimming: a) the new bits are definitely not alternate endings, and b) good lord that is some atrocious first-person writing. They also don't seem to believe in explanatory author's notes.
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From: (Anonymous)So I went and actually clicked on the thing after I made my previous comment, and based on my pained skimming: a) the new bits are definitely not alternate endings, and b) good lord that is some atrocious first-person writing. They also don't seem to believe in explanatory author's notes.