Someone wrote in [community profile] dekedangle_rpfanon 2016-07-18 09:44 pm (UTC)

Re: Fic Discussion - one foot in the golden life

I really enjoyed this fic. Chance's feelings of inadequacy felt well-done, and the resolution was realistic without being heavy-handed.

The only thing that really annoyed me was Chance basically spilling everything to Hannah and asking her for relationship advice. At that point they'd met all of twice. I wasn't sure why he called her instead of one of his friends who he had known longer. (Though my response may be disproportionate - it always bugs me in fic when characters act too close to each other given their actual level of acquaintance.)

Other than that, which is a really minor point, it was good. It was so nice to see two characters actually communicate their problems instead of dancing around them for the whole fic.

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