Someone wrote in [community profile] dekedangle_rpfanon 2016-07-21 03:08 pm (UTC)

Re: Fic Discussion - looking for a good story

This really did not work for me at all. The "on the record / off the record" shtick could have been fun if the ratio of the latter to the former had been like 5 to 1, but was it was, I could never get rolling with the narrative because the pieces were so short and switched back and forth between modes so often. They mostly weren't even dramatized scenes, just a summary of what happened.

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