Have you ever been disappointed with a story so much you're willing to give up your first born child to make it better? TBH this one was tropey Sid/Geno and unrealistic but sometimes I don't mind that when it's well written, and I actually that the things they all did wrong came back to haunt them but it's just so badly written it makes me mad lol :(
Clunky dialogue, no firm grasp of characters, Geno worrying that his daughters might be sold off as sex slaves, THAT CRINGE SCENE IN THE END, etc. I'm so annoyed.
Re: Fic Discussion - Heaven Help a Fool Who Falls in Love
Have you ever been disappointed with a story so much you're willing to give up your first born child to make it better? TBH this one was tropey Sid/Geno and unrealistic but sometimes I don't mind that when it's well written, and I actually that the things they all did wrong came back to haunt them but it's just so badly written it makes me mad lol :(
Clunky dialogue, no firm grasp of characters, Geno worrying that his daughters might be sold off as sex slaves, THAT CRINGE SCENE IN THE END, etc. I'm so annoyed.