Re: Fic Discussion - an island entire of itself

From: (Anonymous)
http://archiveofourown.org/works/7218550
Daemon-having hockey players, written for S/G exchange in June but I only got to it this week. Summary, tags, and premise weren't inspiring, but I gave it a go and enjoyed it.
I liked
- References to penguins history while also including this year's team
- Writing style - not unique but a bit unusual for the pairing's fandom
- Just enough Greek mythology references to rule out coincidence
I didn't like
- Lumpy pacing and inconsistent tone, some awkward words
- Wanted to see more of the main relationship - sort of got why they liked each other, but reader left to suspend disbelief and fill in the blanks
- Geno having a bear. Always with the bear!!
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