Someone wrote in [community profile] dekedangle_rpfanon 2016-08-13 09:32 pm (UTC)

Re: Exchanges, etc - M/M rares is open!

Giroud is a true Frenchman but in this fic he's basically 100℅ a North American bro in his dialogue. He's so OOC that he's just a badly written OC here (utterly generic, no personality, merely a plot device).

And I second what the other posters are saying about messy logic/plot holes.

I will credit the fic for having good SPAG, so at least there's that.

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