Nonnie who is writing the fill - there's a lot more of it, like 7 or 8k, but it began working better as original fiction than as fic, so I'm trying to rework it, and am stuck on a plot point, arg. I wish there were a way to post it anonymously to get feedback (beyond the kinkmeme, which I don't feel I have control over), since I'm not sure it works at all.