I like this fic because there's something about the neediness and the pining that I enjoy, and I do think her writing style is satisfactory. There's only so long I can get dragged along with the kind of fic where the entire plot is based on communication failure. I guess I knew what I was signing up for and I'm still enjoying getting dragged along for the big reveal (which I assume will end in a 5k sex scene), but if Tyler would say "I'm not a wolf" and Jamie would say "Yes you are" this fic would've been over like 20,000 words ago.