I liked her homelessness verse. From the very beginning it was kind of weird (Tyler just dumps a dog on a stranger?), but it managed to do homeless fic without dipping into pointless melodrama too much. I liked the side characters best of all - she did a good job drawing them into realistic people without dwelling on them too long. Having said that, her stuff all reads better to me as origfic.
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