after they’d been kissing in Auston’s bed for what felt like only a few minutes, even though when Auston looked at the clock, it was nearly dinnertime, meaning hours had passed.

I hate when fic authors don't have any sense of time. Did they really spend HOURS just making out, nothing else? Do you realise how long that is? And you're telling me they didn't even progress to handjobs or a bit of dry-humping? Yeah okay.