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dekedangle_rpf_mod ([personal profile] dekedangle_rpf_mod) wrote in [community profile] dekedangle_rpfanon2017-04-06 05:59 pm

#29 – Lay, Lie, or Laine?

This is the twenty-ninth post of Deke Dangle RPF Anon, a community for all your ice hockey anon meme needs.

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Re: Fic Discussions- and i've just let these little things slip out of my mouth

(Anonymous) 2017-05-08 05:45 am (UTC)(link)
I think the author's Greek, if I'm not confusing them with someone else, so I mostly let little grammatical things slide, but there are definitely a few higher level things I would have loved to poke at before it got sent out.

(Same as I wish there was someone to poke at this thing that's been sitting in my folder forever. It's mostly "finished," but I just know something is missing. Beta woes abound.)

Re: Fic Discussions- and i've just let these little things slip out of my mouth

(Anonymous) 2017-05-08 11:17 pm (UTC)(link)
what's the pairing on yours? i'm willing to take a poke at it if they're people i don't hate (hawks period, and not big on marner particularly marner/matthews either.)

because i'm *trying* to read this one and it is just bugging my inner editor. (i'm also a little "yeah RIGHT" about skjei's offering himself up to practice on, but the choppiness is bothering me more than any characterization issue so far. not very far in yet though, so that could change.)

Re: Fic Discussions- and i've just let these little things slip out of my mouth

(Anonymous) 2017-05-09 01:51 am (UTC)(link)
sa

just finished, still want to edit the fuck out of this, and skjei's "oh shit i'm not as straight as i thought i was" epiphany was too understated and came too late in the narrative to suit my tastes.

i couldn't help thinking "jimmy's rebound nick should have been nick leddy" just for the amusement/cross-town rivalry factor, although judging from leddy's usual fic characterization he probably would have been sensible enough to be "hell no i am staying at *least* a borough away from the rookie drama".