I really really like it - I think the characterization for each of them is great and clear, and the role of he ensemble is well done. I do with the author would punctuate dialog correctly - combined with the somewhat wandering POV there are times where I can't tell if something is being said to someone or by someone. But a minor pick in an otherwise really enjoyable and refreshing series.
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Re: Fic discussion - You'd Never Even Know (Lula 'Verse)
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