AYRT - Ah, I only got the biblical reference I wasn't aware of the short story. There were some nice descriptions in there, but, it was certainly lacking in romance. Perhaps it could have done more to explore trying to communicate to a lover without words.
I enjoyed the remix more, because you did get more of Tyler and I am not a big fan of second person, so I struggled a bit with the original.
I liked 'Maybe if you're good', because it did give you some insight into the Pearson/Toffoli dynamic and how they ended up together.
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Re: Fic Discussions - Remix
From: (Anonymous)I enjoyed the remix more, because you did get more of Tyler and I am not a big fan of second person, so I struggled a bit with the original.
I liked 'Maybe if you're good', because it did give you some insight into the Pearson/Toffoli dynamic and how they ended up together.